30 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – tango”

1. Dreamy words, Bjorn

   • I see dreams in his eyes.

2. You did it perfectly … lovely !!!

   • Thank you 🙂

3. I like all three. They work well both together or apart. Unlike the tango.;-)

   • True, but if you listen to tango there is a dark melancholy that goes well with subdued passion inside.

4. Yes…there’s the melancholy….but not too dark all the same. Nice touch.

   • Another side of tango.

5. Melancholy dance
   Fiery rhythms invite
   A deeper embrace

   Cheers!
   JzB

   • Thank you 🙂 There’s hope in yearning

6. I wish I may, I wish I might….Dreams are not forbidden.
   Beautiful, Björn.

   • Thank you. Music are images of dreams.

7. this happens to me when I ride the subway…smiles

   • Ha, I can imagine 🙂

8. The haiku is great but best of allI love the expression you have captured on his face!

   • Yes, it’s an interesting expression. But it was pure accident.. He could be bored by her chattering too 🙂

9. Dreamy eyes … deep thoughts of passion. Strong haiku set … in different way it feels really like a tango.

   • Thank you, yes there is a sadness in tango that I wanted to capture

10. another very unique set ^^
    takes two to tango- definitely..
    couldn’t help but smile at the look of that guy’s face.. i wonder what’s on his mind really lol he looks awfully deep in thought

    • I guess you find that look many times, but it’s an unusual one if you are in conversation with someone.

11. Wow – you captured all of that from a glance on a subway train. You’ve done the haiku, now do the short story!!!

    • yes that would be fun to see what could be done as a challenge… 🙂

12. Forbidden thoughts, dreamy eyes, this combo is doing a tango in my mind, very crafty!

    • Thank you 🙂

13. I stared and waited for the couple to burst into a passionate subway tango….did you see them too?

    • Probably just in their heads .

14. Wonderfully rendered… I like the idea that our passions don’t aways have to be ripe and ready.
    Eliz

    • Thank you, yes there are many passions underneath.

15. Please, let me indulge in those forbidden thoughts! 🙂

    Tango

    • You hear the thoughts in tha rhythm of the tango. 🙂

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