14 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – eyes”

1. Very dramatic.

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   I still cannot comment on his blog, and can’t find any othr way to communicate with him.

   Thanx,
   JzB

   • I have this problem on some of his blogs too! Maybe he’ll see this!

2. i love the fierceness of the yellow slits…and the danger lurking in the velvet night…

3. Oh, dear! Uh, deer! 🙂

   If These Bones Had Eyes

   • Lol

4. I love your use of eyes to communicate the perspective of the animals.

5. I forgive you for sparking the Rocky Theme off in my head with your great first haiku, because the second was startling! Thank you 🙂

   • A little ear worm is great to start from

6. Dramatic final twist after the lulling of the initial description!

7. tiger eyes … that’s strong !!!

8. Very nice haiku. When the tiger is infuriated, his eyes turn ochre…

9. you made a natural occurrence sound so mystical…..nice job!

10. I loved your use of ‘velvet’ For some reason it added to the surprise in the third line! Great write!

11. Danger is in the air…and not just for the deer! Wonderful!

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