By herself – Villanelle

There are so many prompts, but tonight I wanted to do a little experiment on Villanelle without any prompt at all. Keeping each line to three iambs, make an interesting impression I thought. I had to reuse some words in the rhyme, so I hope it’s not too repetitive.

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she looks into herself
reflected up above
in joy one loves oneself
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like glistening wooden elf
with stars she falls in love
she looks into herself
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above there on her shelf
she can all others shove
in joy one loves oneself
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one can not help oneself
feel sorry for this dove
she looks into herself
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to her there’s just a self
the rest she’s disposed of
in joy one loves oneself
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it’s so lonely by yourself
when laughing at their love
she looks into herself
in joy one loves oneself?



December 2, 2012

2 responses to “By herself – Villanelle

  1. Its been a long long time I wrote a poetry form .. These days haiku or free verse rule my head 😀
    But you temp me now. Will try soon. I always mess up iamb but I can play with repetition of lines form 🙂

    This was beautiful ..

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