15 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – rain”

1. o! o absolutely love them! excellent Bjorn.

   • Thank you, and I’m so happy they do 😉

2. I am enthusiastic about these nice summer- and autumn-rain haiku. I was looking forward to your post for today … well you did great on your ‘own’ prompt. Nice composition. Here it was also a misty and rainy day … and I was longing for summer. Your summer rain haiku was very welcome … a little bit sun on a rainy autumn day 🙂

   • Thank you, the rain we had yesterday was really depressing. Rain in summer might make you wet, but it’s usually just life giving.

3. I like the black asphalt mirror… great take there on both the versions… certainly Summer and Winter rains are poles apart…

   • The autumn one I wanted to make a little more city like so to speak. Usually I huddle inside if it’s raining.

4. November and it wasn’t overcast here. The wind has been driving frayed little clouds across the sky. Shortly before arriving at work I had to stop to jot down: Not the chilling wind / It’s the light in autumnal trees / That makes me shiver. But we had rain the last days, so I could also look for some haiku to publish as Carpe diem haiku “rain”, which you had suggested. Thanks! What a prolific topic! And thanks for the “black asphalt mirror”.

   • Great words there Lothar

5. The black asphalt mirror really posed a nice image … wonderful haiku !!!

   • Thank you 🙂

6. absolutely wonderful. Bjorn….I too find these gloomy November days depressing….so dreary….and, yes, wet feet….

   • wet feet season is upon us all.

7. Wonderfully creative and enlightening haiku ~ love the ‘living waters’ ~ great photography ~ (A Creative Harbor) ^_^ on Blogger ^_^

   • Thank you, summer is easier to write on.

8. I love these lines:
   “my feet are wet
   shadow of the power lines
   hot tea inside”
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   Powerful images with a reward…the hot tea inside.
   Thank you,
   Siggi in Downeast Maine

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