Haiku for Haiku Heights. tree.
yet a spring is here
with hesitant greenery
aging oaks stretch out
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aging oaks stretch out
welcome summer sun again
brother in decay
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brother in decay
as acorns were the same
victim of a storm
November 17, 2012


Descriptive haiku on the wheel of life and death. Well crafted.
Thank you 🙂
“Aging oaks stretch out’ I love all that this line suggests. Nicely done.
Very nice imagery of the cycle.
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I think these are just right – the first one reaches that classic haiku theme of ‘opposites – the young spring and old oak. The 2nd..the almost false promise. The last the happening changing the course of events, for grand and small – thanks. Enjoyed.
Wow, thank you 🙂
I love your set. very season a new story – ♥
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Wonderful cascade, Brudberg
Thank you Celestine
Thank you so much 🙂
Superb ! Loved the lines…brother in decay , hesitant greenery !
Thank you 🙂
Nice imagery through your cascading Haiku!
Standing People
Thank you 🙂
You captured the life of an oak perfectly, wonderful !
I am happy you liked it
The cycle never ends, does it?
Palo Verde Tree
the acorns have the ability to sprout in a new Oak, and the cycle goes on….lovely!
Oh thank you so much