Haiku heights – tree

Haiku for Haiku Heights. tree.

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yet a spring is here
with hesitant greenery
aging oaks stretch out
~~~
aging oaks stretch out
welcome summer sun again
brother in decay
~~~
brother in decay
as acorns were the same
victim of a storm

November 17, 2012

21 responses to “Haiku heights – tree

  1. I think these are just right – the first one reaches that classic haiku theme of ‘opposites – the young spring and old oak. The 2nd..the almost false promise. The last the happening changing the course of events, for grand and small – thanks. Enjoyed.

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