Freedom of the sailor?

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set sail
escape today
a weekend freedom is
with friends enjoy the sea again
forget
the child
within, can love expensive toys
forget the loans in wind
and monday work
to pay

A little mirror cinquain, I try to keep it iambic, as I think it adds a nice rhythm to it.
September 30, 2012

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