ocean battlefield
attack on open shoreline
protected lagoon
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protected lagoon
better than commercial spa
battlefield thunder
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battlefield thunder
It’s close but yet protected
a refreshing swim
Haiku for Haiku Heights battlefield
September 29, 2012
Writing about living in two places (and times)
Poems & Stories from The Author Stew
practising for a whole life
haikai poetry matters
Running in the slow lane
The view from here ... Or here!
“Life is like riding a bicycle. To keep your balance, you must keep moving.” — Albert Einstein
chronicling my quarter life crisis
Björn Rudbergs writings 
Very nice cascading haiku … you’ve used battlefield in wonderful different way. Good job.
Unique take on the prompt!! I like it !
Wow! The poetry is simply lovely, and the photo is awesome.
Thank you 🙂 I find that combining a prompt with som picture is excellent for inspiration.
A refreshing swim sounds very appealing to me right now (my nook of the Earth is boiling). With your on the lagoon being better than commercial spa. It has to be.
It can be a little cold… but certainly refreshing.
How nice if I could drown my sorrows while resting in your protected pool – ♥
Sorrows float away quickly immersed in a tidal pool
good set of haiku.. 🙂
Thank you 🙂
Ocean battlefield/protected lagoon makes a wonderful contrast.