25 responses to “September heights haiku – meadow”

1. A lovely haiku, and the image as well. Like it.

   • Thank you 🙂

2. Nice twist at the end..

   • Thanks

3. I like this, especially the second line. Not sure I get the connection between the lips and the hay fever, other than the sneeze, though…

   • Lips is the pastoral, meadow gives hay fewer 🙂 Thanks for comment

4. I love the end- caught me off guard- made me smile- well done!

   • I am glad, that was the purpose 🙂

5. I like this. Glad I don’t get hay fever so I could enjoy this beautiful meadow as much as I want. Nicely done.

   • 🙂

6. Hay fever! Priceless!

   • Thanks 🙂

7. Indeed brought a smile on my face.. 🙂
   Welcome to my space and many thanks for sharing your thoughts on my writings….Keep visiting

   • 🙂 Will do that.

8. LOL, indeed

9. The first and last line is the highlight…

   http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/cherished-moments.html

10. Very lovely

    • Thanks you 🙂

11. ‘verdant meadow pastoral’ – love that line!

    • Thank you Hazel

12. The last line certainly caught me by surprise!

    No Meadow

13. Very cool twist at the end.

    • Humor is possible also in haiku

14. Very true. Humour! I sometimes hide haiku in my prose, or explanations on my explanatory blog. Or elsewhere.

    • Many of the big haiku poets had lots of humour in their poetry.To have it as a a twist at the end I think is true to haiku intentions.

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