I roam
And searching you
Around familiar roads
Your footsteps lead me to an end
Stonewalled
—
An experiment to do a Cinquain
July 1, 2012
Björn Rudbergs writings
Poetry and fiction by a physicist from the dark side
I roam
And searching you
Around familiar roads
Your footsteps lead me to an end
Stonewalled
—
An experiment to do a Cinquain
July 1, 2012
Writing about living in two places (and times)
Poems & Stories from The Author Stew
practising for a whole life
haikai poetry matters
Running in the slow lane
The view from here ... Or here!
“Life is like riding a bicycle. To keep your balance, you must keep moving.” — Albert Einstein
chronicling my quarter life crisis
Björn Rudbergs writings 
I remember a teacher long long long ago teaching us this form and haiku also. This made me think of a sonnet I wrote long long ago also. Unfinished it was. Recently finished here.
Thank you. I experimented a while with cinquain form. It’s really nice in iambic form..
You are quite welcome. I just remembered another one that this brought to mind. This one, is perhaps even more reminiscent of this beautiful, elegantly brief one of yours.