The black eyes

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Black and empty eyes
Stare without a soul inside
See them every day
On my daily walk outside
Sometimes think I see
Life that flickers in the dark
But it’s fantasy
Nothing moving there beyond
And i know it is
Just internal emptiness
Windows of abandoned house
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I extended a tanka, I did on then #5poem prompt on twitter.
Word of the week was window. Extension is done in chōka scheme

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